In the red zone I would build a bridge across the river near the boat shed because every time I see the swans I always want to go across the river but there's no bridge that is so annoying. Black swans they are always so kind and gentle and I would build a steel and You could if your lucky spot a fish in the river. Willow trees glistening dropping into the water that's why we should have a bridge in the red zone. You walk your dog smelling new smells dogs meeting dogs just so nice and peaceful with fruit trees and bridges that live in the red zone.
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Thursday, March 25, 2021
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